MIGRAIN October assessment learner response

Feedback given from assessment:

 WWW:

  • This is a strange party: you really show some excellent potential in places. Your response to Q2 is close to top-level so there is a lot to build on here.


 EBI:

  • The main lessons here are actually exam techniques
  • Clearly timing is a problem: you must answer the 20 mark Q with an extended response
  • You must answer the question-don't drift off into speculation...analyse the text you are given and use the wording from the question
  • Don't describe the theory: apply it! 

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